Make Your Own Sun

I am going to write a children's book. Here is a rough draft:

"Hey little juju-bee," Says the long green catepillar, "you have such a sad little face on what's wrong?"

"Well," the little juju-bug replied, "my family was murdered."

And then the long green catepillar eats the juju-bug. First, he bites off his head, and then sucks the entrails out like spaghetti.

"Yucky, that juju-bug did not taste good at all, if I had known he would have been so gross I wouldn't have eaten him. Oh, the sun is coming out."